"Oh thank you so so much for reading Jro, lol. Hope you don't mind my shorter abbreviation of your name. I'm liking this whole writing style thing everyone keeps talking about. Really thanks for the comment. I hope you and everyone else…"
"Hi to all, I've noticed that a lot of people have banners or something for their stories. Can anyone tell me how or where to get them? Also, A Jesse Desplat does videos for stories but he or she doesn't do non-Twilight stories. Anyone know…"
"Hey 27, lol, yeah you became a number. Hope you don't mind. You'll stick out from the rest, that's good, right? I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. I hope everyone will be okay with the shorter chapters. It's easier for me. I…"
I think your story is very promising, so go on writing.
I would like to see what Changes are Coming for your character, Ally.
Will she move from sadness to happiness?
Good luck with your story.
"Thank you so much Chris for reading and a huge thanks for commenting. I have been sitting 50/50 on if I should take this down. It didn't seem that anyone wanted to read it. So thanks! I would hug you right now if I could :)
Should I leave…"
This is very well written. I enjoyed reading it a lot. You have a very good descriptive style, I particularly liked the phrase 'a blanket of people all dressed in black with white flakes resting on their shoulders' and your use…"
"Hi! I'm new here obviously lol. Can you tell me something? Is it not good to post an original story on here? No one seems to want to read my very first story. Maybe it isn't good. I don't know. I'm just wondering if I should take…"