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Ghosts {a story of a miserable girl}


I see strange unexplainable figures that follow every step I take. This isn’t a reality to the normal person but I’m not one of those luck people. Sometimes I wish I didn’t exist so much humiliation isn’t tolerable anymore. . . .my life is a horror movie waiting for its end and it wont stop till it gets it.

Chapter 1

I was walking, heading my way to homeroom down the vacant hall. It was my first day of freshman year another horrible day of school ; I was already late. I was prepared for the constant name calling and pushing books out of my hand that was a yearly routine. But now a ‘days its gotten worser instead of ppl just glaring at me like usual when they pass by, they laugh at how ridiculous I look, as if I need another reason for ppl to humiliate me. I personally don’t like my appearance either but, my mother Jacky says I look . . . good. I’m very tan [too much for my taste] ,have brown curly hair and slender with dark brown eyes. All of that combined makes everyone stare at me like I’m a freak.
I skidded to a stop there in front of me was the wooden door I was expecting. On it was an engraved 198 the same number on my schedule. I walked slowly inside and hid behind my curly hair I was trying to avoid eye contact with my classmates. I knew what their reaction would be: plain disgust. I sat in the nearest empty seat watching the floor and almost fell on it but caught myself on the chair before I can humiliate myself. Great, I can already hear what my new nick name will be clumsymass. I sat there quiet hoping my name wouldn’t b called but surprisingly, the voice who spoke wasn’t mocking me. “Hey Massmine” an unfamiliar voice whispered I turned around and shocked saw that Krystal a girl who lived across the Street from me on my quiet neighborhood called my name. She never did actually talk to me she was way to shy to say anything .The only words I’ve heard from her mouth was ‘Welcome to the neighborhood’ the first day I moved in and that’s probably because her parents forced her to . Since then , nothing, why would she talk to me? I’m a weirdo to everyone as long as I’m concerned. I managed to say “hi-i” stumbling on the syllables, my face had a worried look on it. Luckily, the teacher : an old woman with pale wrinkled skin {my new home room teacher ; Mrs. Cope} came in the door just in time to stop the conversation. There in back of her was a black shapeless figure following her into the room. This is what I usually saw lurking around every corner some scarier then others ; what I almost always see in every building but this one here was one of the frightening ones. It was coming towards me floating in the air very casually as if it belonged here. It came slowly to my side and brushed itself very softly tickling me in a scary way, it left goose bumps. I shivered shaking my head, go away go away I thought hoping for it to somehow hear me. I heard Mrs. Cope say “Massmine?” maybe she’s taking attendance, “Here“? It sounded like a question when I responded. “alrighty then,” she began ” as u know I’m ur new homeroom teacher and you’ll be learning much more then last year”
The day went the same as in homeroom every teacher explained what they were going to do in the year and after thinking about what I have to go through this time, I was happy when lunch finally came. Although, that same strange figure I saw earlier was following me during Science but disappeared when the bell rung. Weird.
Today was turning out pretty good I haven’t been picked on and no ghost seem to be in this new school {except for that strange one} I kinda like it at this place, the teachers seemed pretty nice. Better then the ones who couldn’t even pronounce my name at my old school. I rushed into the cafeteria hoping to find a empty table so I wouldn’t have to talk to anyone {not that anyone would talk to me} but unexpectedly Krystal was sitting at the only empty lunch table she waved at me and mouthed ‘come over here’ obediently I went to see what she wanted I might as well get it over with. I sat down on the little wooden stool and she started to talk “ so I was wondering do u want to sit with me ,I really don’t have friends and -” I stopped her “sure,” I smiled trying to be as convincing as I possibly could I needed a friend and she seemed. . . . quiet enough. I bit my lip confused is she using me? She could of got way better friends then me all she’s doing is getting herself into trouble. “I’m going to get something to eat” she replied pointing her small finger to the pizza counter. She was probably tired of waiting for me to talk. She should know by now she’s not going to get out very much from me.
I stood up and went to the bending machine to go get a Twister I wasn’t that hungry : my stomach was feeling queasy because of the mysterious figure that’s starting to freak me out I needed to watch it more carefully. I was about to put the dollar in the black slot when some girl with blonde hair passed by and smashed a pudding cup onto my head she continued walking while it dripped covering my face in brown goop. I frowned viciously my reaction was to grab her arm and spin her around : demand her problem but decided not to knowing she could win the match no doubt, I smoothly put my hand in my pocket letting the pudding be. She dared to look back while she was walking to see the damage she made and stopped to smirk towards me. “Sorry, I’m being rude did u want that” ?? she said mocking me, gesturing her hand towards my head. She knew I wouldn’t do a thing to her and was about to continue but hesitated and left laughing hysterically to go join her 3 identical friends. I sighed, I’m not going to let this ruin my day. I know it could of gone worser and I should be grateful .I went to the condiment table to get a napkin .I took the piece of paper and gently wiped my face. Ugg, !! the pudding was sticky it soaked through and dirtied my hand. I shook my fingers to get it off ,the goop hit the floor, splattering my face. I’m so stupid well, at least Krystal didn’t see any of it she was too busy waiting in line waiting for her slice of pizza maybe at least I still have a chance at being her friend. I let it be and walked to the table, ’didn’t even bother to go to clean the rest of my face. In fact, I still haven’t even gotten the juice, oh well I’m not even hungry and everybody already thinks I’m weird anyway. I sat down and something shocked me besides Krystal’s astonished face, I saw the same black shadow. It was soaring in the air toward the blonde girl just like it did to me this morning but this time the shadow charged like a bullet with anger. It soared through the air but my eyes were somehow capable to see every detail clearly coming after another. The figure stopped moving, it wrapped itself very tightly around the girls thin leg under the lunch table. She jumped quickly out of her wooden stool ,” Suuu-zy were u touching my leg“? she cried her voice shaking. “No, what r u talking about” the indistinguishable girl replied curtly. “aahhh” she screamed .I felt a need to go over to her and laugh in her face just like she did to me. She was acting ridiculous, its just a harmless ghost it wont hurt u. The figure stayed there comfortably while the girl repeatedly shook her leg trying to shake the ghost off with no luck for a second I thought I saw a curved line on its face almost as if it were smiling.
“Something’s on me!! Something’s on-“ the blondy replied urgently while running through the room and bumping into a kid with a lunch tray. It fell on her face covering her with mashed potatoes and chocolate milk. She ran through the doors leading herself to the bathroom she didn’t even get to finish saying what she was going to she was too busy choking in food.
The bell rung loudly disturbing the whole drama scene. I quickly took my schedule out of my bag and checked what class I had next “So what class do u have next” Krystal said casually “Math” “me too, guess well go together” she said while sighing. We got up and headed through the crowded doorway lucky for us we only had to go around the corner to our class. We were the first ones there and I picked a seat in the front, just out of habit not that it’ll help, If anyone wants to make fun of me they’ll go right ahead a teacher wont stop them. Krystal followed me she sat in the next seat. She scowled at the chalk board, disturbing my chain of thoughts I was too busy looking at her outfit I haven’t noticed all day. She was wearing a pink polo with skinny jeans {the expensive type} her hair was pulled into a messy bun covering her tan face in caramel color strands . I should of noticed before she was one of those high society families that explains her house; nice big and white. She was rich, I really haven’t payed attention before I don’t to anyone really. No need to look at every single detail if u don’t judge ppl or talk to anyone.
The teacher stood up from her desk and began the same lecture I’ve heard all day. It always included the words ‘new year ,harder work and more responsibility’ math passed slowly I kept staring at the door waiting for a glimpse of the shadow but it never came the bell rung and Krystal was still grinding her teeth in frustration. She must really hate math or the whole speech thing. I was happy I’ve made it thought the whole day unscratched besides the pudding incident and the glaring nothing really happened. I hurried out of the room I didn’t want to ruin more of my day I was in a rush to go home to c my mother.

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2.) im a really GOOD artist/writer
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When Did You First Read Twilight (year) and how many times have you read a Twilight Book (total)?

This year (2010)
I read all of the books in less then 1 week
Team Edward or Team Jacob? Why?

Team Edward
even though ive always thought Bella should end up with
but i luv Jacob almost as much both
r great

i love how Edward is so romantic and just makes the whole book kinda
warm and fuzzy

Which Character Are You Most Like?

I sometimes seem to see the future or sense something is going
to happen it almost always does when i sense it

I know no one would believe me if i said that so no
one really know that about me
I'm also like Bella I am very shy and don't relate to most ppl sometimes i can b very enthusiastic but i gotta be very happy just like her
Favorite Books

The twilight Series Duh
(eclipse) LOL
What is Your Favorite Music

I like to listen to almost everything

Favorite Movies, TV Shows, Games:

Movies - Twilight series
TV Shows - A Haunting,Totally spies, The secret life of an American girl and Ghost Hunters

Favorite Game - Any Mario games

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At 8:34pm on November 21, 2011, Vindessa Cullen said…

Have you seen BD yet?

At 12:49am on May 29, 2011, elika stewart said…
hi sorry i was not online from soooooo long
At 10:41am on February 10, 2011, Twilighter #1 Simran G. said…

:P. cool

At 8:34pm on December 6, 2010, ♍♥~cяเรtყ~♥♍ said…
Hi, how are you?
¿¿¿Do you keep writing your story???
At 7:34pm on November 22, 2010, Alice Renesmee Bella Cullen said…
funny chrismas pic! hey jaz!
At 5:59pm on November 20, 2010, jada cullen said…
LOLZ.......................i love ur profile pic.
At 3:47pm on November 4, 2010, Vindessa Cullen said…
Your stories are really good. Keep it up. ^_^
At 10:56pm on October 21, 2010, Яσмαиcɛ ιƨ мʏ ғιcтισи said…
Nessa//Your a very good writer Honey I love writing myself I think your really good

Lila//I love you stories you have to keep going :D
At 6:08pm on October 16, 2010, Alice Cullen (Keeley) said…
OMG i love ur profile pic
its funny
At 8:28pm on October 3, 2010, Klare Shats said…
Hey! I read the Ghost story and I kind of liked it. I just feel so bad for the girl.
At 7:48pm on September 27, 2010, Alice Renesmee Bella Cullen said…
ill read it!
At 7:36pm on September 27, 2010, ✯The_Randomsᶫᵒᵛᵉᵧₒᵤ✯ said…
I like the Emmett story. You should update me. But, I dont belong to the group though, so I'll just update by this, m'kay?
At 9:30pm on August 26, 2010, XO Edward XO Jacob XO said…
Thanks for the update... I love this story and the new chapter was great!
At 1:14am on August 17, 2010, lizzie said…
i really liked it acctually even thought im not into the whole ghost paranormal stuff but it was great!!!;)
At 6:42am on July 29, 2010, Aarati. Edward Cullen Patil said…
hey hi jasmin
thnx for adding me
& actually i am reading your stories & i just loved them, sorry i didn't put a comment i will do that & plz write more & do update me when you will post the new chapter.
At 1:17pm on July 15, 2010, Alice Cullen (Keeley) said…

At 11:54pm on July 11, 2010, edwardlover#1 said…
sure no prob here u go

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At 4:21pm on July 11, 2010, Kaitlin said…
you definately have amazing talent!
At 1:26pm on July 11, 2010, Alice Cullen (Keeley) said…
cool, i love it keep writing u could be a story book writer.
At 1:23pm on July 3, 2010, Ruby S. Bunie said…
Chapter 1 and 2 are on my page but not for long

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