"OMG! You decided to post it again? Its different, I mean the word choice is but not the plotline... did you delete the other discussion for this story? Anyway I love it and I'll watch for the next chapter!"
p.s. Cherokee is a super cool story :) And since you like writing so much, I'd really recommend checking out the google blog Go Teen Writers. It helps a lot with learning about grammer, wording things, and just how to make your story look good word wise and story wise. :) It helps me a lot, I used to be not so good at grammer (still not) but go teen writers has helped me a lot. :D
wow that was so nice of JJ to give me as a banner maker ref. I do make banners so, just tell me the title, the name of any other possible co-authors (if it's just you let me know) and any ideas you have for the banner, so that the banner Imake is close to your ideals. thanks a lot :D