WOOOOOW!!! THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS. THIS ANOTHER GREAT FAN FICTION THAT I HOPE WILL CONTINUE TO BEE GOOD!! YOU ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITTER! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON AND LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU DO ON THE UPDATES. THATKS SO MUCH YOU REALY ARE GOOD!! ECK!! IM ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR AND THATS NOT GOOD CAUSE I AM ALSO WAITING ON ANOTHER STORY TO GET THE NEXT CHAPTER AND SO IM SITTING ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR FOR THAT ONE AND I KINDA THINK IM GONNA FALL SOON. . . . LOL ANY WAYS YOU HAVE MY SUPPORT!!!
hi Sarah Cullen umm i just added more to my story. (BREAKING DAWN CONTINUES.) well as you may know, my story was deleted. so i started over. plz go read it and check it out let me know if you want the link.
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"Exactly, this is fantastic... Could you write more please? I think everyone would enjoy it but could you please stick to one person's point of view? I think the story would be less confusing and better. (No offense)"
"WOOOOOW!!! THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS. THIS ANOTHER GREAT FAN FICTION THAT I HOPE WILL CONTINUE TO BEE GOOD!! YOU ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITTER! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON AND LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU DO ON THE…"
It really wasn’t bad at all. It was even kind of good. Not great but survivable. Bella slowed and then stopped. She walked over to Edward and said, “Is it safe to have her meet Renesmee yet? And what about…"
"very gooooood! I love it and u did such a good job on making it sound like something the character might say, especialy Carlisle's "part", it sounds just like him..........cant wait for more!