"Melissa Roosenburg was talking about her writing the script of Breaking Dawn (it hasnt been greenlit yet but shes just playing around with it) and she said everything will be toned down to the pg-13 rating
She was referring to the gorey disgusting…"
"It's cool, but you can't really understand it, like when they're talking you have to put quotation marks " around where they are talking, and it wouldn't hurt to press enter to skip lines to make it easier to read, no…"
"I'm glad you're okay with my comments. I really did intend for them to be helpful, especially since you're just starting. (By the way, I was the spell checker for the newspaper at my school because I was faster than the computer. You…"
"It's interesting, but I don't like having to read it without proper grammar, especially for a writer. You've got a lot of competition in the fan fiction world. If you don't care what it looks like, why should I?"