Hy everyone :D:D i have got a problem(again xD) I don't know how to start my story. i have got an introduction and a gage to my story. But that's all. Help me please!!!:(:( Thanks for everybody(L)

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Comment by Tiffany Hampson on February 19, 2011 at 6:47am

She's boyfriend will be Seth at the end and firstly she went to the Volturi and be a member of it.

But she is a half-vampire and her power is that she could make humans from the vampires and make vampires from humans.

Comment by Blacklight1798 on February 19, 2011 at 1:01am

how about you start at when and why she was changed.....shes compassionate and sweet so maybe shes supposed to be cauis's wife or his heir to the throne if he ever steps down......or maybe she has a power of use and they are gonna use her to infultrate the cullens (you know what they say keep your friends close and your enimee's closer)....to make it more interesting you could start from the end so shes telling her story to someone about her past and keep flashing back to the present and to her past but make sure ppl will know what time frame shes in so they wont get confused then then when she catches up to the present make the story jump out at the reader and have twists and turns you could do that but it makes the story confusing at first and then ppl will get that she was telling her story cause shes goin in and out of the past and the present and then the story tells wat happens in  her near future and then you could end it how you think the reader might have never guessed it too but as it closes the endin of her story is iffy

Comment by Jordan Clement on February 17, 2011 at 6:57pm

what do u think the begnning should be????