book

I have started to write a novel. It is about a girl named Alice. Right now the plot is sketchy, but it is getting there. I will begin yo post the story up when I get it writen a little but more.

Some of it is one a website called: bookinprogress.webs.com
There arte a lot of spelling and grammer errors. I have not found a good person to edit it yet.

Please tell me your thoughts and tell me if It has any potential.
thanks ahead of time.
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The first chapter is called goodbyes. Thats not the story name. The name is still undecided.