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i just wanted to know what ppl thought because i might submit it into a contest for my school



"Abandoned"

My life is a constant mess,

A forever game of chess,

Every piece will leave,

Never enough time to grieve,

I won't even cry,

As they all say goodbye,

I won't ask them to stay,

As they go their own way,

No thought goes to me,

Of what a mess I will be,

I put on a smile,

But only for a while,

For when I am alone,

My true feelings are shown,

I'm a broken kid,

Tortured by what they did,

When will I hear "check mate"?

Maybe it's too late,

I'll play this forever game of chess,

Just waiting for some success,

I'll wait for the day,

When someone will stay.

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Comment by ♥ love 4 twilight forever♥ on May 9, 2009 at 10:27am
wow thats an awesome poem *wipes lil tear drop* its really deep ^.^
Comment by shayla on May 7, 2009 at 8:41pm
wow, deep, real deep...
Comment by Rose on March 9, 2009 at 4:13pm
This is really really really great. I love how you us the game of chess in you life. I would give it first place in your school.Great Job!

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