The Twilight Saga

After Breaking Dawn ( they way it could happen), My first fan-fiction PLZZZZ COMMENT

Chapter 1

Bella POV

It had been 8 years after Renesmee was born and i became a vampire. Even though she was only 8 years old she had the body of a 17 years old, she had stopped growing ny now . Today was her birthday so we took her to the big cullens house.Once we walked in Alice, Jasper, Emmett, Rosalie, Esme and Carlise all yelled "Happy Birthday Renesmee" then laughed when they saw her shocked face. As usal Alice went overboard with decorating she blew up heaps of ballons with helium so they all rose to the roof and covered it so we couldnt see it. . There was a big banner saying "HAPPY 17TH BIRTHDAY RENESMEE" HANGING UP. Alice put a large white cloth over Esme's dinner table and placed a stack of plates,spoons,cup and big cake with strawberry frosting in the middle. Alice even picked out a dress she Renesmee had to wear. It was a lilac color dress,strapless,knee-lenght, it had a silver color belt which was just under the chest and on that belt was six colored flowers.

It was a great blast everyone was there the Cullen's, Jacob and Sam's packs, Sue Clearwater and Charlie. After a lot of hugs and kisses for Renesmee we ate the cake ( well the non-vampires did) and talked. Renesmee ended up getting a braclet from Jacob (kind of like the one he gave me; me and edward accepted Jacob imprinting on Renesmee we knew he could look after her and love her), me and Edward gave her a new car which was a black lamborghini murcielago( Jacob couldnt stop gwaking at it) and the rest well there was to many to remember.

That afternoon i took Renesmee out hunting since she didnt like the taste of cake. Just me and her she wanted some mother bonding time with her mother so we could talk bout girly stuff. Once we had ate i took her to the medow. We sat down next to a tree on the soft grass and looked out to the sunset. Renesmee was the first one to speak.
"Mom what would u say if i said i.... like someone" she looked at me with and anxious face.
"Renesmee honey, i dont mind if u like someone u hav got to that age where ur hormones are starting to kick in" I replied to her with a soft, carm voice and wiped a lock of her hair away.
"Really u don't mind"
"Of course not, infact this was the age when i met ur dad"
She sighed with relief. Then went anxious again because she probly new what i was going to say next.
"Well... whose the lucky guy?" i asked her trying to make it looked like i didnt know who it was; Edward told me before when we in our little cottage and she was out with Alice, he told me she was starting to hav real feelings for Jacob.
"Umm, this may come as a shock its a little awkard but its... Jacob," she looked to the ground while speaking.
I let out a sigh but then smiled, " Thought so, Ur Dad told me u were starting to hav some feeling for Jacob"
Renesmee let out a little giggle which sounded like wind chimes just like Alice.
" I should of known Dad would know about this" Then we both giggled harmoniously, then we giggled again because the first time it almost sounded like a song.
Then she said " Well mom what should i do, do i tell him or would that be weird because we are like best friends or i dont know what to do, i need some advice."
" Well its not going to be weird because well im not the one to explain," i continued " i think its time to go see Jake"
I jumped up a held out my hand. She stood up slowly and looked at me and said " Are u sure" I replied "Positive"
Then we ran back to the house to get Jake.



Plz leave a comment on my first fan-fiction

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Comment by Carly L. on April 2, 2010 at 7:33pm
It was good.
Comment by Bella Swan Cullen on October 4, 2009 at 4:07pm
Awesome, I love it. Please post more soon! And is it just me, or is it white?
Comment by ms.seth on July 14, 2009 at 6:16pm
your off to a good start! i wanna' know jakes reaction though! lol
Comment by Jesse Lee Cullen on July 13, 2009 at 2:31am
thx im am going to write more tonight =]
Comment by Steph Lautner on July 12, 2009 at 11:53pm
This was great.
Keep me updated for when you post another chapter.
If you have time, check this fanfic out.
It's newly posted.
You have great talent.
I need to know what you think of this fanfic.
http://www.thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/beautiful-disaster
If you don't wanna read it, then it's fine.
Comment by kayla garcia on July 12, 2009 at 9:11pm
it was good
Comment by Jesse Lee Cullen on July 12, 2009 at 1:30am
thx for the comment, ill post some more soon, i need some more comments tho so try get some pplz to read it =]
Comment by taylor beach on July 11, 2009 at 8:10pm
that was awsome i love it its egsactly wat stephnie meyer would have put i want more ad meas a friend and email it
Comment by Jesse Lee Cullen on July 11, 2009 at 7:29pm
plz comment

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