The Twilight Saga

I walked in the door coming home from school so happy that jimmy finally asked me out for tomorrow night.'mom im home 'i shouted as i ran upstairs to my room.I didnt pay attention enough to notice she didnt answer.I put on my earphones and listened to my ipod.Then I heard a loud thump come from the kitchen like someone was grabbing a fork or spoon.I ran downstairs thinking that it was my mom getting ready to cook but it wasnt.It was a strange man.he grabbed my arm shaking me saying that if I had screamed he would kill me but it turns out it was a knife that he pulled when i heard that noise then he pulled out a gun.I used one of the techniqes my dad showed me since he retired from being a cop.I twisted his arm so hard I heard a crack then he let me go.I ran to the basement terrified that he might find me.I saw my mother dead on the floor and also my dad and my brother.I got on my knees and started to pray to god that he would keep me safe.Then I heard him call my name 'jennifer' he said very slowly.I closed my eyes so tight that it felt like my eyes were sinking in.'ccccrrrrrrrreeeee'I heard the door open.He saw me immediatedly and ran downstairs.I tried to run but he was too fast and he caught me.'look at my arm' he shouted to me.He held the gun up saying 'you crossed the line pal' (pow).I fell to the ground bleeding to death my moms body was right near my head.Then as I was laying there I said' Lord please remember me and bless this man to finally notice that what he did was wrong'amen.I died right at the spot from bleeding to death.

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Comment by Junius Anythony Wilson on July 7, 2011 at 10:50am
so sad lol
Comment by twilightdivagurl on March 26, 2011 at 10:41am

thanx um im actualy makin a book about the strange killer this is only one of the ppl he killed but dont wrry cuz it has a happy ending

Comment by Twilight Chick on February 26, 2011 at 10:33pm
OMG! That was so sad.She was totally selfless.I would have told him to rot in h**l for eternity if he ever shot me. This is really good.Keep up the good work. :)
Comment by Jordan Clement on January 12, 2011 at 9:42pm
its good. Intense, i luv it

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