DAY BREAK: Intro

"My name is renesmee carlie cullen and im 7 yrs old."

"you look alot older" patricia said. i sighed and said.

"i look older than i say i am i look like im 16 or 17 and thats because im not normal. i mean no one is but what i mean is that im not human well fully human i should say. im half vampire half human and thats because my dad is a vampire and my mom gave birth to me while she was human and now shes a vampire. dont be freaked out we arent gonna drink your blood we are 'vegetarians' meaning we only drink animal blood. in my family there is me, my mom bella, my dad edward, my grandpa carlisle, my grandma esme, my aunt alice, my aunt rosalie, my uncle emmet, my uncle jasper, my grandpa charlie, and my boyfiend jacob. everyone in my family is a vampire except me, my boyfriend jacob,and my grandpa charlie. jacob is a werewolf and my grandpa charlie is human. now you know my family and what we are."

"Your......you.....what?!?!?"

"Patricia.......i know this is a shock i just wanted you to know because your my best friend an dyour about to become.....a vampire.

Please say something!"

"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH"she screamed. I filnched.

"shes still in the transformation from human to vampire so shes in alot of pain right now, maybe now isnt the best time to tell her sweetheart." my dad said. i sighed and went down stairs so that she could finish the transformation in peace.

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Comment by Guy Douglas Ogan on March 1, 2011 at 2:33pm: Who bit Patricia? In BD it said Renesmee wasn't venimous or is she able to change someone in your story (what is called "literary license")?

Comment by Lena-maria on February 21, 2011 at 12:43pm: That is really good, I would of happily carried on reading had there been more.

Comment by Blacklight1798 on February 16, 2011 at 4:47pm: i added more so plz reread intro

Comment by MarlainCarter on February 10, 2011 at 1:16pm: Ok,that was really good.

Comment by Guy Douglas Ogan on February 9, 2011 at 3:28pm: I'm sure everyone looks forward to learning MUCH MORE about Renesmee (Nessie to her closest family and friends - sorry Bella that nickname is just too cute, it's gonna stick). The possiblities for more stories about the Cullens seem endless to me and I look forward with great anticipation to see what the creative mind of my now favorite author comes up with (and I'll bet I'm not the only one who doesn't want to see the stories end)! Write Stephenie write....lol!

Comment by Nikki Hmelitez on February 8, 2011 at 4:32pm: Its a good start. Will there be more? Hope so.