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Free 2 Love (If Bella's Fellings for Jacob Grew, 2nd Writers Comp.)

Free 2 Love (if bella's fellings for jake grew)

Bella's POV

The past few months have been very difficult for me to endure.
Thankfully I had my best friend Jacob to help pull me out of that deep
dark pit of loneliness and misery. Although I've told him time after
time that there was no use and he could help me, he never gave up.
Because of Jake I no longer think of Edward and my nightmares are long

Today is a new day and Jake promised to take me cliff jumping. I hoped
out of my bed, got ready and went down stairs for breakfast. Charlie had
already left for work so I are and wrote him a note:
Spending the day with Jake ;-)!

On my way out of the house I grab an extra set of clothes and locked the
door behind me. My truck roared to life and I was on my way to see my
dear sweat Jake. The closer I got to La Push the more anxious I became.
Every since Jake became a werewolf and imprinted on me, its been
impossible for me to deny the feelings I've felt for him. I never had to
be careful with Jake, i could always be myself with him. (In a way
that made me feel free to love him.
) And I love him more than I ever
that I could. I finally arrived at Jake's house and my heart was in my
throat (its funny how he still make me nervous). I killed the
engine and got out of my truck. I started to walk towards his garage,
but I heard the front door open, and there he was the love of my life
stood with a smile on his face.
"Hey Bells!" He said.
I ran over to hug him," I thought I would never get here!" I pecked him
on the lips.
"I have a surprise for you," he said with that beautiful smile of his.
" Jake," I blushed.
"Its ok Bell's, you'll love it, I promise. But first lets go cliff
We both got into my truck and I drove down to First Beach. I parked my
truck facing back the way we came. Jake came over to my side to open my
door, the perfect gentleman. We had to walk through the woods to get to
the cliff.
“Are you ready?” He asked
“Y… yes,” I hesitated
“You sure?” This time I nodded. I put my hand in his and we took three
steps back.
“Ready, set, go!” he yelled. We ran forward together. When my feet left
the ground I instantly felt free. I was happy and I left every bad thing
that happened in the past up on that cliff. A new beginning I
thought to myself as our bodies entered the ice cold body of water. My
hand still in his, we swam back to shore. I spotted a light blue blanket
laid out on the sand. I looked up at Jake and he just smiled down at
“Jake, I’m kind of cold, just let me change into some dry clothes.”
“Bells it will only take a minute…” I’ve always loved the way he said my
name. We walked over to the blanket, I shivered and Jake just pulled me
closer to him. He sat me down on the blanket and said “I’ll be right
back.” I was confused but I waited for him to return to me. With in a
few minutes Jake was back with one hand behind his back and a crooked
smile on his face. He used his free hand to pull me up to my feet.
“… Yes Jake?”
“I have a very important question to ask you.”
“Jake you know you can ask me anything.” I said completely oblivious to
the situation at hand.
He took and deep breathe and said, “ Bella, you are my life, you are the
object of my affections, you are by far the best thing that ever
happened to me… I know I’m only eighteen, (he got down on one knee) but,
Isabella Marie Swan will you marry me?”
My mouth just dropped, I was shocked, and before I could process what
just happened I told him “YES!” I thought I saw a tear drop from his
eyes as he placed the ring on my finger. He stood up and kissed me
passionately, (he makes my knees get weak). Jake picked me up so that my
legs would wrap around his waist. (I loved it when he held me like
this.) I grabbed a fist full of his hair and through myself into his
kiss. This night, under the moon and the stars, Jacob Black and I made
love for the first time.

I woke up the next morning feeling like a brand new person. It took me
longer than it should have to realize where I was. I was in Jacob’s room
in his bed. Where is Jake? I thought to my self, and I found a piece of
paper lying on the bed beside me.
Good morning Love, I left to go check in with pack. Get dressed and
breakfast is on the table. Oh and don’t worry about Charlie, I spoke to
him this morning and told him you just crashed on the couch. I will be
back in about an hour. I love you Bella
–Love Jake

I got up and did as the letter commanded. After eating breakfast I sat
in the living room to wait for Jake to get back. Did last night
really happen?
I looked down at the beautiful ring on mt finger
which was proof that last night indeed did happen! I am still shocked. Jake
and I are fresh out of high school and we're already planning our
future together.
I was so taken by the beauty of this ring that I
didn’t even notice Jake standing in the doorway. When I looked up at him
he smiled.
“Thank you,” He said.
“For what? I should be telling you thank you.”
“Thank you for saying yes, thank you for loving me and letting my love
you. Thank you for everything Bella.” By this time he was knelling down
in front of me. I wrapped my arms around his neck and placed his head on
my chest.
“Jake I love you with all of my heart, I will do anything for you. So
why wouldn’t I say yes to you?” I paused. “Thank YOU Jake. Thank you for
rescuing me, thank you for being there when I had no one else. You are
the reason I live… the reason behind every breath I take. I would love
to spend the rest of my life with you.” I said with tears forming in my
eyes. He looked up at me and before he could say anything I kissed him
passionately. He pulled away, both of our breathing heavy. He sat down
beside me pulling me onto his lap. “Bella, there are not enough words
for me to begin to explain how much I love you.”
“You don’t have to explain Jake, I feel the same way about you.” We just
sat there, him cradling me to his chest, it felt like hours and I never
wanted to move.

A Few Moments Later… we decided that we should sit our fathers down and
give them the good news. Jake helped me gather my things and we headed
to my truck. He stared at me the whole ride to my house. I was relieved
when I finally pulled into the front yard.
“So… have you given a wedding date and thought yet?” he asked.
“Um… well actually I have.” We got out of the truck and went into the
“And what did you come up with?”
“I was thinking maybe in the middle of August…” I stopped to look at
Jacob only to see that he was smiling. “Is that too soon for you?”
“No, actually its perfect!” I smiled at him. “I’m going to go call
Charlie, I wont be long,” I told him. He went into the living room and
turned the tv on.
“Hello? Dad?.. What time will you be home?.. Will you pick Billy up on
the way?.. Jake and I have a surprise for the two of you… OK bye! I
joined Jake in the living room. “They will be here in about thirty
minutes… You scared?”
“Come on Bells, I’m never scared!” We both laughed, he was so corny but I
thought it was cute. Billy and Charlie finally got to the house; Jake
went outside to help Charlie get Billy inside. It took them a minute but
finally they were inside. Once everyone got settled, we just sat there
in the living room staring at each other.
“So what’s the big surprise?” Charlie asked. Jake and I glanced at each
other and smiled.
“Well,” Billy was starting to get impatient.
“Well dad, Charlie, Bella and I are planning to be married in August.”
As Jake spoke I lifted my left hand to show them the ring. Charlie’s
mouth flew open, and Billy’s eyes got wide.
“Wow,” Charlie said taking my hand.
“Well done son,” said Billy
“That went better than I expected.” I thought aloud.

To be continued… Maybe (1500+)

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Comment by kamila black cullen on January 5, 2011 at 6:48pm
i love it soooo much and whoever ur competin with is gonna lose i love ur stories so much may the best lady win lol !!!!
Comment by Kelley Brady on September 21, 2010 at 3:48pm
Fantastic story! I hope you finish it.
Comment by Zanica [♥ʙɛɐuᴛiғuᴌ_ɱiᴎᴅ♥™] on September 19, 2010 at 8:52pm
Thank you both @gina rose if I win the comp, I get to finish it <\font> (I think I want to finish it anyway) <\font>
And I hope that yhe two of you will vote for my short story
Comment by Meaghan on September 19, 2010 at 8:26pm
Mice story!! an interesting twist from what i normally read!!
Comment by Gina Rose on September 18, 2010 at 6:19pm
That was outstaniding! that was so sweet bella n jacob! u have to continue pleaz ^^

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