The Twilight Saga

I Want You (A Carmen and Edward Love Story) Spinoff to I Need You (A Jacob and Bella Love Story)

Carmen Emily Black-(Daughter of Jacob and Bella Black)-Half Wolf/Human

Edward Anthony Cullen-(Son of Esme and Carlisle Cullen)- Vampire

**I will post the chapters on here**


I walked in the door of the Cullen's shop and instantly locked eyes with my new soul mate..Edward Cullen..the guy who tried to kill my parents.

CHAPTER 1- Fishing Poles (Carmen's P.O.V)

Carmen,can you go get us some fishing poles from the Cullen's Camping Supply Store?” my mom asked me. “Sure, how many you need and why?” I asked her. She knows I hate surprises. She laughed and said “Five, and for a thing we're doing. Mind your business please.” “Okay, I'll go get them for the 'thing' your doing.” I said. “Oh,and mom can I go over to Jessica's house after I pick up the fishing poles?” I asked her. “Sure, just get home before it get's after 9pm please.” she said stressing the please. We were gonna go cliff diving so I ran to my room and put on my cliff diving clothes ( ). I ran out the door and hopped in my car ( ) being 17 means I have my own car and don't have to drive my parents car ( ) which isn't exactly what I would call fashion forward. I pulled into the parking lot and got out the car. I walked in the door of the Cullen's shop and instantly locked eyes with my new soul mate..Edward Cullen..the guy who tried to kill my parents. Uh Oh. I can't live without him. How was I supposed to tell my parents? Now he was my world. I want to partly blame my parents because if it wasn't for my mom having me with a werewolf I wouldn't be part were wolf that could imprint,but the thing is they don't control who I fall in love with or what my heart wants. Even if it is a Vampire. The Vampire. My Vampire. Well, this better be a shark free fishing pond. 'Cause you're probably gonna throw me overboard.

(My other post of this story got deleted so I'm reposting and this is the only chapter I have a copy of exactaly)

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Comment by Half Breed on September 7, 2010 at 7:18pm
Edwards POV

I tried calling her. I couldn't get her off my mind. Ever cents I laid my eyes on her at the restaurant. I put the phone down when it went to voice mail. "Fine" I said to myself. I'll just go over there. I turned to walk out the door when Alic stopped me. "Edward this is a bad idea. I really don't see this working out for you." I just brushed her off because I know she couldn't see into Carmen and mines life. I could read it in her mind. She was half wolf so Alic can't really make out anything. I open the door and out it I ran. I stopped at the line and just stuck up my noise and kept on going. I came to her window. She was on the phone talking and laughing with someone. God I could see this was going to be fun. She could blocking me out just like her mom. " Oh Seth HAHAHA yea I miss that stuff too." "WHAT?" I said out loud. God I hope the mutt didn't hire me. She was talking to Seth my god are all this girls in love with DOGS? I walked to the back and stepped into the woods and not much to my surprise there he was in my face. "Well, hello Jake. How are you this nice worm night?"

Carmen's POV

I was in my room on the phone with Seth when I could of sworn that I had hired something out side my window bu, then I hired the back door close. It must have been my dad. I smiled he must have been trying to lesson in on my phone call. I know my dad like Seth and to me it kind was a good thing. But, then well now there was Edward. Should I tell Seth or not? " C.B. whats wrong? You got really quiet." I started to open my mouth but before I could he said " Well can you meet me tonight at the cliff's? I don't think I can wait to see you. Please." My eyes got really big I know they did I could fell it. "Well, OK but it will have to be late tonight after dad goes to bed." "THANK YOU! I can't wait to see you. Ok I'll be there Love you." click. "OMG did he just say that?" I said to myself. I walked out the room to find my mom on the couch with her feet up and a big bowl of ice cream in top of her belly. See I tell my mom everything so it shouldn't surprise her when I tell her this. "Mom I am going to meet Seth tonight after dad goes to bed ok?" She turned and looked at me and just smiled, "Ok sweety I'm glade you told me." I walked into the kitchen to make me a bowl of ice cream to when I saw something shinny in the woods. I Open the back door and whatever it was was gone.
Comment by Kayla McCoy on September 7, 2010 at 6:51pm
Half breed! Could you please write for me.? Pretty Please.? I'm really sick and about to go to the ER if it don't get better. I figured out it's no baby school germs no more! haha...half breed ima email what i want the next part 2 b about.
Comment by Yesh on September 7, 2010 at 1:57am
Wow ... interesting! i like it!
Comment by Half Breed on September 6, 2010 at 2:44pm
I like it. It is getting good. Please add more when you get a chance K and email me to let me know you done it
Comment by Kayla McCoy on September 6, 2010 at 2:35pm
Chapter 8- An Important Phone Call (Jake P.O.V)

The nerve of that bloodsucker is disgusting. I'm surprised at the fact he could come to my car window and ask my daughter on a date knowing the fury it would put me through! The whole car ride was quiet except for the humming of the motor and Carmen's loud humming of the song Love Like Woe – By Ready Set. I looked at Bella who looked confused and grabbed her hand. “It's okay Bells” I said giving her my smile that I know she loves. “I know Jake, it's just I know what Carmen will say and I can't seem to wrap my head around the fact that my daughter may be going on a date with Edward.”she said.
I laughed and finished driving to the house.
We pulled up in the driveway and Carmen darted towards the phone when it rang as soon as we stepped into the doorway. “Hello?” she said with a smile. “Oh, hi Seth. Ummm no I'm not busy then. Do you want to hang out or something?”she said losing her glow but not so much. Seth was her ex boyfriend and she imprinted on him before he left to Florida for a scholarship and she never fully got over him. “Sure, here's my dad.” Carmen then handed me the phone. “Hey Jake, how you been?” I heard Seth boyish voice say. “I've been good, for the most part.” I told him. “Cool, well I was gonna ask, do you mind if I take Carmen to the movies and dinner this weekend? I'm moving back to Forks and want to take her somewhere special to see if the sparks between us are still there.” He said with a hint of shyness. “Sure you can Seth If Carmen wants to.” I told him thinking about what Edward would think. “She said she would as long as you approved.” He told me, I could tell he was smiling. “Okay, Seth well then...” BEEP,BEEP I heard the tone of another call coming in. (Cullen,Edward 912-674-3542) Calling. I hit the ignore button because I was in a conversation. “Carmen! Phone Call!” I yelled and handed her the phone. “You can go with Seth if you want to sweetie.” I said to her. “Thanks dad, I can't wait.” she smiled and took the phone from my hand and walked away.

( i know it took me forever to write this little bit and im sorry!)
Comment by Kayla McCoy on September 6, 2010 at 2:18pm
'yall im sick! germs have got me! lol ima try to write right now so dont be disspointed if i can't get to it! ahhh
Comment by Half Breed on September 3, 2010 at 7:29pm
Hay everyone sorry I haven't been on but been so buzy with my son starting school and my work plus a headache that has lasted 3 weeks and still going strong
Comment by Kayla McCoy on August 23, 2010 at 2:29pm
haha sorry i was on vacation! i'll try to update tommorrow moringng but schools bout to start so i need to get everything ready.
Comment by Kayla McCoy on August 17, 2010 at 5:47pm
haah..when yall want me to write the next chapter???
Comment by Half Breed on August 15, 2010 at 6:12pm
Love Chapter 7 great job

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