The Twilight Saga


shut up paul! i yelled. he was making fun of me like i was picking nessie up from babysitting and how she might have found her high school sweetheart. what its true! paul snickered. I need to go pick her up. and by the way lay off those chips your gonna get fat.i yeled be hind my back.


i pulled into the school where i saw nessie i pulled into a parking place and got out of the car. i saw her standing by a boy. Hey nessie!i yelled and started waving.Hey! hold on im coming! she yelled back. then a horrible thing happend she kissed the boy beside her in the cheek. and she turned around and started walking towards me she was blushing. and by this time i was fuming in anger i was about to faze but i started to calm down i hurried in to the car. nessie came in a few seconds later.hey jake! she said. Why did u kiss that boy on the cheek!i yelled.Wow jake calm down.he showed me around at school all was noting.she said. yeah it may be nothing now,but wait this weekend hes gonna ask her on a date then it would be more than a kiss on the cheek. i thought to my self. I promise she said and she put her hand on mine on the steering wheel.


i drove up to the cullens house she got out of the car and waved goodbye. i waited till she was inside then i started down the drive i got far enough were the mind reading bloodsucker couldnt hear my thoughts. so i got out of the car and fazed in the woods i kept running i didnt know where to go but i stopped along a creek. a few hours went by and i didnt kno it. i looked at the moon it was a ull moon.i promised to my self on the next full moon was when i would tell renesmee i loved her.

hope u guys liked it ..its either gonna be the next story or the one after that where jacob tells her he loves her and then is gonna get really good!!

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Katie Resch Comment by Katie Resch on September 3, 2010 at 11:19am
Umm Renesmee already knows jake loves her
Comment by sherry williams on August 9, 2010 at 4:20pm
Comment by Kelley Brady on July 28, 2010 at 10:18pm
I really like it...please write more!!!!
Comment by suzy kim on July 28, 2010 at 5:21pm
where is part 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by hammysmith on July 27, 2010 at 9:33pm
i like it. it awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by Angel on July 27, 2010 at 8:20pm
yes omg ur story is awesome plz hurry and right more asap
Comment by Savanna on July 27, 2010 at 7:01pm
lol i hope edward gets all mad
Comment by Savanna on July 27, 2010 at 6:59pm
where's part four??
Comment by Alexis Schneider on July 27, 2010 at 4:53pm
loved it PS wat happened to 4!?
Comment by Bella Cullen on July 27, 2010 at 4:10pm
Wow, did u make that up?

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