The Twilight Saga


The rest of the school week went fast. on friday payton dropped me off at my house after school. <3. So your going with us tomorow at la push? he asked when we pulled into his my drive way. Um ya my dad said yes. You said you wernt surfing right? iasked. Yea. he ssaid. me surfing is not a good idea. he laughed. Do you want me to pick you up? he asked. Um ya sure.what time?.iasked him. UUmmm he scrolled threw his phone. John says we will be leaving at 12 so thats what time. he answered. ok see you tomorrow. i answered and as i got out of te car he grabed my arm he started leading in to a kiss but i turned my cheek. i dont want my dad to see me. i laughed. Hahaha ur right he answered. bye isaid. bye.he answered i went into my house and started my homework. and about 10 mintutes later i heard a light knock on my door. May i come in. alice said. yea sure.i answred. so i heard about your date. se said with a little smile. i started to blush. its not a date we are just going with all kinds of friends.i said trying to old back my embaressing smile.You can call just friends i call it a date. she said with a smerk. ya what ever.i answered .what time is he picking you up? she asked. how did you know he was picking me up- wait forgot about the fortune teller..i 12.i answered.what are you going to where?she asked. i dont know! just reagualr school clothes.i answered.well ok then.she said. bye. then she left. about an hour later i was done with my homework.i decided to watch t.v. thee was nothing on so i decided to watch the news it said it was supposed to be cloady. then my mom called me on to eat supper i sat down at the table se made lazonia. so what time is payton picking you up tomrow?my mom asked. Hes picking you up!my dad yelled. Gosh dad you know how annoying that gets! hes just picking me up beacause teres no room in anyone elses car. i yelled. fine.he answered flatley. at leasts its not the mutt. he mumbled what did you say? iasked im. nothing he answered quickly. when i was finished with supper i wen to take a shower when i got out of the sower i got into my pajamas and went to bed.


when i woke up in the morning it was 11 o clock. i decide i wanted to look kinda cute today but not too cute. i put on a paire of skinny jeans with my favorite shirt. i did my hair put on eye liner and mascara and it was 11 50 wen i was done then i got a txt from payton. Im pulling into your drive way.k i answered. i grabbed my jacket when i went out. bye mom bye dad. i yelled behind my back bye honey they yelled back. when i got into paytons car he said you look really cute today he answered followed bye his dazzling smile..ahh thansk so do you.i said blushing.we drove out of my drive way. 10 mintutes later we arrived at lapush we followed a trail back in the woods there was a fir there sat katie riley and zach. hey guess isaid hey renesmee. they answerd back.hey do you want to take a walk on the beach? payton asked. yea sure i said back. ok . he said we walked back on the trail and started on the beach. i didnt noticed until i looked down i saw us holding hands. we just started talking about school and stuff. then jacob came walking on the beach hey jacob i yelled and started waving at him. he came up to me and payton hey ness! he said with a bright grin whos this he asked trying to hold back a mocking tone. O im payton he said and they shook hands. and im jacob.jacob said . would like to come back to the bonfire with us? payton asked. yea sure ! jacob said. when we got back to the bonfire. payton and i sat by eachother and jacob sat b payton. katie started telling ghost stories they were starting to get scary i kept squezzing on to paytons hand then be fore i knew it. he was coming in for a kiss and be foring i knew it we we kissing but then all of a sudden i headr something slam against the ground. it was payton jacob punched im right in the eye! IF YOU EVER TOUCH HER AGAIN! he yelled i was soo scared he was going to faze. Jake clam down its ok! i yelled at him then i ran over to comfort payton . katie and riley and zach were already over there. Holy crap payton are you ok!! i asked him scared to death . umm no! he said what was he doing! he yelld. i dont know i m going to go talk to him. jake i need to talk to you in private!i yelld i walked him out into the woods. why did u punch him?! i yelled. You deserve better! he yelled. what? i asked. Renesmee i am in love with you. jacob said. what? i said. i love yor renesmee you belong with me. a long silence went. jake i..i dont thik i feel the same way.

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Tags: alice, bella, edward, jacob, renesmee


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Katie Resch Comment by Katie Resch on September 3, 2010 at 11:28am
Ok first of all 8th graders cant drive and this is crap
Comment by sherry williams on August 9, 2010 at 11:11pm
love it........
Comment by Alyssa on August 8, 2010 at 12:06am

Comment by Alyssa on August 8, 2010 at 12:06am
More Please PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUHAHAHA AJKE PUNCHED PAYTON!
Comment by Alexis Schneider on August 4, 2010 at 9:36am
Comment by Jordan Clement on August 3, 2010 at 4:47pm
are you writing more yet??????????
Comment by Jordan Clement on July 30, 2010 at 1:17pm
Is Emma Roberts gunna play Renesmee? She shouldnt she's just idk Renesmee enough. Doesnt have that vampire feel to her
Comment by Braylin Madison on July 30, 2010 at 11:06am

Comment by Meaghan on July 29, 2010 at 9:32pm
IT was good!!! WHAT happens next???
Comment by Jordan Clement on July 29, 2010 at 7:26pm
OMG that was awesome! i loved it!

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