Renesmee Cullen. 1
As the Sun came up I woke up to the smell of mourning dew and mom's
lilac bush. I got out of bed and made my way down the stone stairs to find my
Mom and Dad already awake and reading Aunt Roselie's latest novel.
" Good Mourning Renesmee." My mother greeted me. " Good mourning.
How are you liking Aunt Rose's new novel?" I asked sitting down on the
Velvet couch and grabbing my Kindle. " Well I am finding it very moving
and very desciptive. ' As the water trickles down my face all I can feel
is the warmth of his hand strocking my cheek.' She really knows how to
put herself into a book." Dad looked up from his book and smiled as he
saw me. " Ness, why is it that the first thing you grab in the mourning is
that Kindle? Most children pick up a glass of orange juice but you pick
up an electronic reader." He stated. " Well as noted from the day I was
born I am deffinatly not what you would call normal." He chuckled. " Yes
and the fun thin about being not normal is that being your own person
means that you have no one to look up to which means they can never
not be what you expected." I scrolled through the book title's until what
he had said hit me. " I guess your right." I found the book I had downloaded
last night. " Ok well I will be right back I am going to go get dressed. I
locked my Kindle and ran up the stairs. I got dressed. I had put on the dress
that my mother had bought me for my birthday. It was a short red, velvet
dress with black lace at the neck line and at the bottom. I put on a pair
of black flats and ran back downstairs. " Wow Ness you look beautiful.
Your mom and I were thinking about going for a long walk in the forest
so that is the perfect dress." Dad said. He had put down the book and
was now polishing his reading glasses. " Ooh that sounds fun." All of the
sudden we hear the howl of a wolf. Ugh. I looked out the window to see
a large cherry wood colored wolf. The horrid smell of dog came over my
nose. But there was another stench, Blood.
Comment
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Comment by Katie Williams on May 1, 2011 at 3:01pm -
r u going to continue this
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Comment by Vampire Wolfy Girl on December 8, 2010 at 3:36pm -
Well thank you very much for your kind words!
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Comment by Bat-El Shaddai on December 8, 2010 at 3:33pm -
Keep up the great writing. You should get published, it runs in your family. Continue to be descriptive. You are doing wonderfully. Make people see what you are writing so they experience the story you are telling not just reading the words. Make them feel something... see it sense it... Keep up the amazing work. I will continue to read what you write.
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Comment by Vampire Wolfy Girl on December 6, 2010 at 9:33pm
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OMG thank you for the amazing inspiration in you comment Hailey, one question what is you name as the author? It sounds very interesting. And thank you again for the kind words on my story.
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Comment by hailey j boyajian on December 6, 2010 at 8:01pm -
that is AMAZING you are a great writer maybe people will buy you books one day and you would be the one signing every-bodies book and being on the television omg that would be such a good career as long as you keep writing and finish that book you might even write the next twilight book you never know what to expect i am a writer myself i have wrote 1 book so far and it is called the deadly and dangerous daughters and it s about 6 bffs are very spoiled and get what ever they want and one day the bank that their money is in gets robbed and they go against their dads and almos kill them and you will have to buy the book to find out the rest
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Comment by Kelley Brady on December 1, 2010 at 8:56pm
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really enjoyed it! please continue
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