The Twilight Saga

(sorry people for not writing for a while but im back now! )

**renesmee's P.O.V**

I cried as i watch Jacob's lifeless body being taken away..

please be ok, please be ok. I thought to myself when i felt a hand touch my back gently. It was my mom.

She wrapped me in a gently embace and wisper to me

"its ok ness, everythings going to be fine..." if my mom was still able to cry she would be crying now. Jacob was her bestfriend... I sighed.

"I...I just cant stand looking at him like this mom.. it hurt soo much.." I said to her.

"i know sweetie, i know.."


Its been nearly a month since i last seen and heard about Jacob. The pain was killing me..

the pack always seem to change the subjec when i metion him and my family just makes a face and leaves me there wondering...

why isn't anyone telling me?? I thought...

I went for a walk at the beach and remembered all those moment me and Jacob had together..

the time we kissed, laughed and fooled around..

I sat down and cried.. no caring who saw me.

when suddenly i felt a warm hand on my shoulder.

" Its ok Ness, dont cry" A husy voice said to me, I turned around and Nearly jumped on him. It was Jacob! Hes Alive!!! My Jacob!!! he's here!!

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Comment by Patti Skau Larsen on August 9, 2010 at 5:27pm
I just finished and i think it's very good! :)
Please write more!!! :D
Comment by Renesmee Cullen Black on August 8, 2010 at 10:37pm
its the chapter ok?? i feel like this chapter sucks. i think im loosing my writing skillz
Comment by Seashell0303 on August 2, 2010 at 6:20pm
Please write more.

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