Hey Jonathan! I got your email, and I still can't post a comment on the end of Chapter 14. I did set up a blog on the b icon next to the red comments. I believe the address is firstname.lastname@example.org? If it's possible, can you still help me figure out how to get it to post at the end of your chapters? Talk with you later!!!
An added comment it would be nice to have a BD television series based on the forever after with the Cullens and Jacob. Some of your chapters are a continue saga from the stories on what happen to all of them. You could do all the script writings on the BD series with Stephenie Meyer permission to use her trade mark on the books. It is just a thought. I know the stars of the series would be far different from the orginal cast. But, you never know it could be a hit. I would be interesting to see your writings from the chapters you wrote into a big hit TV series.
Your short continue stories on BD is good. Maybe you can get with Stephenie and be joined by the hip so to speak. To continue writing the series. Like her ghost writter. You are good. You may want to try to go out of your own and creat new characters and your own story. About love, vampires and so on.