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At 7:40pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
yes, normally thats what i do but i wanted to write lol
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At 7:30pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
its 30 mins past midnight 4 me, what time is it where u are??
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At 7:28pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
awesomes :) will make sure i send it to u then
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At 7:15pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
i will send u the next chapter when i do it. though that could be a while cos my chapters are ussually 10 pages long
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At 7:06pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
lol, i think english is a really unfair subject cos ur either good at it or ur not, this is why i think that it is a pretty unfaair it is soooo mandetory
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At 6:53pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
once i get into something i just cant quit lol
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At 6:44pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
yerp, the last writing project i was on i wrote 30 pages (bout 17, 000 words) that was 2 chapters and only the begining. anyway i got that far and the plot wasnt really working cos it was too complicated.
At 6:36pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
yea, i meant prolgue lol, i m back now, went to bed, couldnt sleep, got bored came back he he, the prolgue is supposed to be a part of the book to draw ppl in isnt it?? yes, ash is the best friend but damien is some1 very sinister ps there isnt anything supernatural, its all real life sorta thing
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At 5:18pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
for something to do really, i can never really sum up my projetcts in a sentance but i just finished my epilogue, what u think...
My head was spinning and I felt like I was going to pass out. I tried to think clearly but all I could remember was the sound of his rejection. I had expected it, but I didn’t think he was capable of being so harsh. The only thing I could picture was his face as he told me that he felt physically sick at the idea of being with me. Just then the stairs started to tilt. I felt a sickness as the music started intensifying. I swayed and grabbed the banister before I fell. I could feel and hear the vibrations of the music, but not the lyrics. I just saw Ash again, his face angry, almost hurt. It puzzled me why he should be hurt. The face in front of me was suddenly replaced with Damien’s. Only he looked different, his expression was all wrong. His face looked smug, but also like something else was tainting it. The room tilted at a funny angle again and I swayed. A hand caught my arm. Its grip hurt, and the hand was tugging me. I tried to pull away but I couldn’t feel my limbs, I couldn’t muster the strength to move. The hand tugged me again and this time I fell. I could hardly see and everything was going black. All I could remember was Ash. Somehow his face remained perfectly clear in the midst of the blurring images around me. I was vaguely aware that I wasn’t inside anymore. I could feel the cold, the dampness of the garden. I felt a weight pushing me down, pushing me further into unconsciousness. It went black and I couldn’t remember anymore. I couldn’t remember.

i am going now so will hopefully speak tto u 2 morrow
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At 5:08pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
im writing a story bout how a girl falls in love with her best friend and how she learns to cope with him not feeling remotely interested in her. its about how she learns to accept second best and how he learns that he can go through life without being a complete and utter jerk
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At 4:59pm on April 11, 2009, Omg,It'sClarrisa. said…
i bet
At 4:58pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
lols, do they have any?? do u do any writing?
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At 4:50pm on April 11, 2009, Omg,It'sClarrisa. said…
hey.nothin really just singing.
you?
At 4:46pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
just finished eating an ice cream and now i am writing my story
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At 4:37pm on April 11, 2009, Toni said…
hey, i really enjoyed talking to u yesterday. What u up 2 atm then??
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At 4:12pm on April 11, 2009, Kate said…
song and book)
At 4:10pm on April 11, 2009, girscouts2664 said…
I love that she became a vampire! You? :-)
At 4:04pm on April 11, 2009, Kate said…
I am listening to the songs from Twilight))) btw which is your favorite?
At 3:40pm on April 11, 2009, Kate said…
hi, Kirmi, how are you?)
At 3:01pm on April 11, 2009, Bella Swan-Blake said…
I think that I would have to choose Retana's powers. I just love the idea of being able to protect the ones that I love. I also think that Jane's powers are really cool too! Yet I would only use my powers for good and not evil.

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