Awesome!I love werewolves.There're just cool.As for Splinter,that's a lot of changes for one character.I only have one character that's gone from bad to good,and that was Rebecca(she's a werewolf).Also I've been meaning to mention this before;Have you ever heard the song "All The Things She Said" by t.A.T.u?If you haven't,it's on my playlist.I heard it once and I just fell in love with it.But be warned,it can and will get stuck in your head.Also,because you like Blackmore's Night,you would probably like Celtic Woment,too.They're Irish,but I don't have any of their songs on my list.Now,if you'll excuse me,I'm going to go watch X-Men Origins:Wolverine.
(continue)He is what's called a "Healer",which I would describe as being part medicine- man,part warlock,and even part shape-shifter(he can "summon" an animals abilities,but cannot actually change into one of them).A Healer's job in the werewolf pack is to help new members keeep calm,and to help current wolves stay heathly.As you can probably tell by his title,Matt has healing abilities,and because of this,he is second in command. I based most of this off a few things I read about werewolves,which is the same way I based my entire story off of old legends and things about vampires and werewolves.There were a lot of surprising similarities between the two,so then I thought "Well,what if vampires and werewolves were one in the same?Like a mix,or a hybrid,of the two?".And then the rest was history.And sorry that I wasn't on here Friday,like I said I would be.There was some family drama going on,so I just took Friday afternoon to do some things for myself.I did my hair and painted my nails,which are now a sleek and shiny black(girly things are very rare for me).On Saturday there were loads of things to do(shop for groceries,get food for the animals,go to the dump etc.etc....)and by the time we were done,football was on.I still can't believe that S.Carolina beat Georgia by three measly points!I think the Dawgs need a new coach.
Yeah,Matt's my favourite too.He's such a sweety!:) He's also the most stable of my characters,both emotionally and mentally(you'll see what I mean by that in part II).But ironically enough,Jason was the first character I created,and has suffered the least amount of changes(aside from his last name).His appearence hasn't changed much at all,while Matt has gone from being werewolf with brown hair and blue eyes to a blonde "Healer" with bright green eyes.But,of course,Khira is the character with the most changes by far.I've changed everything from her looks to her personality.She used to have bright red hair and amber eyes,but I didn't think that that really fit her personality,or my story for that matter.Actually,I just realized that I still haven't really told you what Hybrid's about.Well,right after Khira's talk with Matt about Jason,she start's getting a another headache(she's been having them for weeks,but I somehow forgot to mention it)and thinking that it's just stress,she goes home and tries to relax.That night,on a full moon,Jason creeps into her window and accidentally startles her,as she had her back to him.She tells him that she's not feeling well(she now has a fever and feels a little achy),and then snaps at him for not making any noise when he came in.He comes to stand behind her and,after sweeping her hair away from the right side of her neck,bends down and whispers in her ear "Forgive me".He then places his lips on her lower neck,as if to kiss her,but bites her instead.I'm not going to go into any more detail than that,but it turns out that Khira actually posesses a werewolf gene,and because of the vampire venom inserted in her vains by Jason,it triggers her transformation earlier than expected,for the werewolves(including Matt)have been keeping an eye on her for quite some time.After her near-fatal transformation,Khira is now considered a "hybrid",half werewolf and half vampire.By now,you've probably geussed that Matt's not human,either.
You know, I liked Rem until she done that! I don't mind Misa but SHE'S THE CAUSE OF L'S DEATH!!!
Ooo! You're the real life L and the person type thing of Light!.. Yes... yes it does XD lol just kidding ^_^ or am I? You'll never know XD
....L...M...N... where is O? XD No one can replace L, I'm sorry. :3 But Near and Mello are... nmph, no words really :3 I think it should have ended when L died OR possibly ended with Light dying and L being alive... I don't like it when Light basically loses his mind... it's freaky O.O poor Ryuk...
(More of Hybrid:Part 1)A month after they have been dating,Jason knocks on Khira's window and(even though it's the middle of the night)asks for her to let him in.She does,and after asking him "What the hell are you doing here at one'o clock in the morning?!" he starts explaining that he has something to tell her that just "couldn't wait any longer".He tell's her that he is actually a vampire,and(after Khira say's that she believes that he's just trying to pull some prank on her)he even goes so far as to show her his fangs,which are quite similer to a snake's,and his "True Eyes",which are a startling shade of bright red.At first she is shocked and dumbfounded,not to mention at a complete loss for words.He tells her that he loves her and that she doesn't need to be afraid.And that he will give her some time to think about what he has said,and that if she decides that she didn't want to be aroud him anymore that he would understand.He starts to leave but Khira stops him,and tells him that she believes everything he had said,especially when he said that he loved her.(It was practically torture for me to write this next part,since I don't like vampires at all)She said that she feels the same way and they kiss.They continue to date,but Khira notices a change in Jason's behavior.He seems more volitile and when one day they get into a argument he even goes so far as to slap her.Again she is shocked and confused,while Jason's outbursts seem to be getting even worse.A few weeks later,Khira recieves another visit from Matt(who always seems to know when she is upset)and after he notices the bruises on her arms,he becomes increasingly worried about her.She insists that everythings fine,but Matt knows that she is lying to him and herself.He tries to telll her to break-up with Jason,but she tells him she can't,and only that she will think about it if he gets any worse.That same night,on a full moon--I'm out of room,and I have to leave now,its late.I'll continue this tomorrow.
Again,that's very creative.Wish I could read the whole thing.Do you have a title for it yet?My first story,Hybrid,is actually made up of two parts.The first half starts off as being sorta generic in the beginning,but gets better as it progresses.It focuses on a 16 year old girl named Khira O'Brian,who is the main protagonist.It's starts off as a normal day for her until she learns that there's a new student in school.His name is Jason Chambers.He has dark hair,fair skin,and pale blue eyes that are,for some reason,unnerving to look at.At first Khira doesn't pay much attention to him,even though her friends insist that he appears to have some intrest in her,as he keeps glancing in her direction.Later,she meets up with her best friend,Matthew Jordan,and tries to talk to him.He claims that he's in a hurry and has to go.Khira isn't surprised by his behavior,as he has been acting strangley for months,or at least ever since he started hanging out with a new group of friends that Khira doesn't know much about.Feeling frustrated,she turns and makes her way to class.After some time,Jason(the mysterious new student) starts making his apparent attraction to Khira more evident.He turns out to be quite charming and seems to know all the right things to say to a girl.It takes a while,but Khira eventually convinces herself that she just imagined the look she first saw in his eyes.Jason and Khira start dating,but after a few weeks Matthew approaches her and tries to warn her that "dating Jason might not be such a great idea",but of course this leads to an argument,in which Khira states "Don't try to tell me what to do,Matt!".Afterwards,she storms off irratated at Matt and at herself for yelling at Matt,because she knows that he was really just trying to help.After about a month,Jason decides to finally tell Khira something.Something that will change all of their lives forever.(To be continued...)
First;That has to be the longest comment in the history of TTS.Second;Your story sounds awesome.If it were a book,I'd be reading it right now instead of being on here.Third;Why are you going to kill off River?The other two I can understand,but why River?Isn't she like your main character?I'm considering killing off my main character,Khira,too.But I haven't decided yet.And aside from that story(which I titled "Hybrid"),I've also started working on another called "DreamHaven".Neither of them are as creative as yours,but these are just my first two.Due to my solitary behavior and loose grip on reality,I've always been very imaginative and good at making up inventive stories,but none of them could compare to yours.That's just amazing.You could probably beat out C.S. Lewis when it comes to creativity.Bravo! *claps hands*
Ah,I see.That's fine.I'm straight myself,but I'm the last person that should be judging anyone.One thing that's really annoys me is when someone that doesn't even know you as a person,tries to judge you.It just pisses me off.Oh and my name's Destiny,by the way.Mikhala's my middle name and what I'm most commonly known by online.And I couldn't agree with you more about sad songs and books.That's why New Moon is pretty much the only book I really like from TTS.It's the only one with any real emotion.And MCR is just amazing.Gerard Way is a musical genius.(But Evanescence is still my fav,simply because Amy Lee has a voice that would blow your mind) Who's EA?Do you mean Emilie Autumn?Personally,I didn't care for her that much.*shruggs* But that's just me.Do you think you could tell me more about your story?I love fantasy,too.Ooh and that reminds me!At a yard sale,I found a really old copy of Grimm's Fairy Tales and the woman gave it to me for free!!Isn't that great?It has a leather binding and everything.
I have to write this again,because the first one earned me another warning.How many warnings do you get before you're kicked off the site?Well if you don't see me again,I was either banned or commited suicide;)*laughs*That's a joke,in case you're wondering.Not a very tasteful joke,but a joke none the less.Anyways,that's what music is for,right?To express how you feel.Besides the really heartbreaking ones are always the most beautiful(example "Like You" by Evanescence).And what do you write about?I have a story I've been meaning to work on,but I never really have the time.I also like to write bits and pieces of poetry when I can.Which is usually at night when I'm alone and left to think about things...Ok,enough of that.And I know exactly how you feel about the whole "back-stabbing bff"deal.Been there,done that,too.This was back before I wasn't that anti-social and a couple friends.Also,are you a girl or a boy?Because I kinda had the impression that you were a girl,but then you said that you have a GF.I'm just curious.
*sighs*Well,I live with my grandparents and I don't see much of my "real parents" at all,which is kind of a blessing and a curse.My "mom"'s a peice of street trash(whom of which has not visited me since I was an infant),and my "dad"'s not much better.Do you know that he didn't even so much as call me on my so-called "sweet 16"?Even though our birthday's on on the same freakin' day?!There's no way in hell he forgot!!*another sigh*Sorry.Didn't mean to rant.My parents just really piss me off...Anyways,if you wanna know how I've been,you can probably guess by my current playlist."This Is How I Disappear" and "Ghost of You" by MCR,and "Lacrymosa","Missing",and "Tourniquet" by Evanescence.God,don't you just hate emotional roller coasters?
That's funny.I became interested for the exact opposite reason.I don't really know much about Irish customes or legends at all.You're lucky(for more than one reason).The only thing I really know about my Irish heritage is that,apparently,both of my grandparents are of Irish descent,and that my last name is Irish.But to be honest I don't really like my last name,because(long story short)it's the same last name as my dad.To say that I have "daddy issues"would be a servere understatement.Oh,and sorry I didn't reply sooner.I just haven't felt like talking to anyone for a few days.