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At 9:55pm on April 14, 2014, Jenna Marie said…

Jenna: She stood up and followed silently behind him. She could clearly see her father's black cadillac car parked right beside james car, which was previously vacant. Squeezing herself close to him, she prayed that her father wouldnt come out. Her heart was beating hard, with every step, closer to the car. All of a sudden, she heard the chime of a bell, signalling someone coming out of the diner. Not having time to look, she whisper-shouted panickly to james, '' Open the door !! " As soon as the car unlocked, she throw herself inside and lowered her head. If her father had seen her, she was dead. She was thinking of all the possibilities that could happen. To make things worse, he could have taken down the license plate number. She was beyond frightened and stress, thinking of all this. '' How..now ? ". Braving herself, she turned to look outside, and the man was indeed her father and his eyes were looking at her in shocked. She made a mistake, turning around. Shaking in her seat, she found herself having another panic attack. "" Ohgod..he's gonna kill me. Help me...don't leave me. He's gonna get me " She broke down in a heap of shoulder-shaking sobs. She then couldn’t breathe. Her heart races. It’s pounding so hard, it feels like it will pound its way through her chest. She can feel it there. Pounding. Harder. Faster. No breath. Her lungs don’t work. Her chest felt tight. Too tight. Squeezing her heart. She tries to suck in air, but ]her heart is pounding too hard. No air. Her arms go number, pins and needles starting at my fingers and racing up my arms like wildfire. All too consuming.  She could hear words, so loud, so loud I can’t hear them.

(( sorry if it's too long. Got a little carried away. haha XD ))

At 5:00am on April 10, 2014, ℓσѕт σηєƨ ™ said…
"Well yeah. We always knew he had a pretty deep voice but when we heard him sing for the first time, it kinda reminded me personally of a younger Morgan Freeman," she chuckled.
"Gee thanks," Andy called, tossing the towel he was using to wipe sweat off his face and beck with at Annabeth, who jumped back.
At 8:51pm on April 9, 2014, мιѕтαĸєn.™ said…
Cris got dressed and looked at him. "i was at the park.."
At 8:05pm on April 9, 2014, Relying on Love. said…
Emily jumped off and kissed Cara softly with a wink. " I love you
At 7:54pm on April 9, 2014, Relying on Love. said…
Emily laughed and ran to the play ground hopping on the swings. " Push mr Cara!!"
At 7:48pm on April 9, 2014, Relying on Love. said…
Emily made sure there was nobodybaround as she changed out of her dress and into the t shirt and shorts. " I dontllook that cute anymore. Im sorry " she said pulling her hair back
At 7:43pm on April 9, 2014, Relying on Love. said…
Emily pouted slightly and stepped out of the creek. " My dress is ruined.." she said with a soft sigh. " Thank you fir the blAnket
At 7:20pm on April 9, 2014, мιѕтαĸєn.™ said…

Chris fell asleep in the shower until it got cold and she woke and got out.

At 11:58pm on April 7, 2014, ℓσѕт σηєƨ ™ said…
"Imagine everyone's reaction when we heard him sing for the first time," she chuckled, high fiving each of the band members as they walked by.
At 12:23pm on April 6, 2014, мιѕтαĸєn.™ said…
Chris sighed and whent vack home taking her clothes off and getting in the shower
At 9:31am on April 6, 2014, Relying on Love. said…
Emily giggled slightky and shivered slightly as she snuggled closer to her chest. " That water is cold..."
At 3:27am on April 6, 2014, ღNo Saving Meღ said…

Tobias took your hand and lifted your head softly and whispered softly."From the day I met you baby you stole my heart."he whispered"I don't know what I would do without you."he whispered"you have been with me through thick and thin. I can't wait to spend the rest of my life."he whispered softly then bit his lip softly"id give up everything my own life for you"he whispered softly and wrapped her arms around your neck gently."You are all I need in sickness and health and forever and always"

At 3:04am on April 6, 2014, ღNo Saving Meღ said…

Sasha gasped and closed her eyes loving that. She touched your cheek softly and gasped."your so sweet"she whispered. She tried to forget the question but nodded softly finding it a hard idea. She bit her bottom lip softly and trailed her fingers down your cheek softly"please"she whispered softly.

Tobias looked into your eyes softly. He heard the priest ask if they wanted to say there own vows. He looked at you waiting for your answer he had written some up but he wanted to be sure thats what you wanted.

At 1:49am on April 6, 2014, Second Chances said…
Nick Was on the beach with son both of them running to the waves hand and hand nick picked him up by his arms swinging him over the waves and smiled as he laughed
At 1:07am on April 6, 2014, Relying on Love. said…
Emily laughed and kissed her softly. She stepped back and lost her footing. She landed in the cold wAter and laughed hard. Her dress was drenched. " Car a..." she pouted and hekd her hands out to her
At 12:17pm on April 1, 2014, мιѕтαĸєn.™ said…

Chris stayed there and took deep breathes until it was finally after midnight and she was calm enough to go home.

At 6:20am on April 1, 2014, Relying on Love. said…
Emily smiled and walkd d ober to her as sue looked atbl the clay wall. " What is it babe?" She asked curiously
At 4:38am on April 1, 2014, Jenna Marie said…
Jenna: Her legs felt like jelly. The very sight of her dad, frightened the hell out of her. Seeing the back door, she proceeded to open the door with her shaky hands. Once she was out, she shakily let out a breath. Her chest felt heavy, and she had the heaviest urge to cry. However, she didn't want to seem weak. Squatting down against the wall, she buried her face in her hands. Her whole body was shaking, but no tears were escaping her. Reaching out her left hand, she held James hand. " Sorry..for ruining that dinner ".
At 4:28am on April 1, 2014, ℓσѕт σηєƨ ™ said…
"Yup." She replied. Annabeth couldn't help but to smile at the 'Black Veil Brides!!' chant that resonated through the audience.
At 12:12pm on March 30, 2014, Jenna Marie said…

Jenna: She ducked her head, blushing furiously at his comment. Her whole face was flushed. At that moment, the waiter arrived with their food. Thanking him, she began tucking in, smiling at james between bites. " Do you know any place around here, that have an open vacancy for jobs ? " She wanted a job, so that she could pay for staying at his friend's house, and also so that she could start paying for her own stuff. She didn't want to have to depend on him and have him spoon-feeding her. Hearing the chime of the bell, signalling a new customer, she look towards the door. She was shocked beyond words. Dropping her fork, she lowered her hand, trying to stop her hands fro, shaking. Tears prickled her eyes, glazing her eye. Her dad had just walked in.

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