I read New Horizons. You've written a good basis for a book :) I thought that the story itself is good but what you've written so far, is moving forward kind of fast. Keep all of it in the story but I suggest that you put it in a longer period of time so that the story doesn't run so fast. Those are only my thoughts... Hopefully it wasn't scrappy bacause it was hard to explain my thoughts in English :/ Keep on writing! :) I would like to read more of it :)
Thanks for the Invite, it made me feel very welcomed to this site. I am also VERY anxious and excited to see New Moon. So much so I will be seeing that midnight showing of it on Nov 20th!! CAN'T WAIT!!! Afterwards we will all have so much more to discuss!