im going to rewrite m story. there probably wont be any update for a while unless you want them. but im pretty sure your the only one reading it anyway. it you want updates let me know other wise im just going to write the whole thing then post it.
lol well like you said it need some editing but then again i shouldnt be talking look at mine! but the story line is really good! If you dont mind,im not sure if your still reading mine or not but i would love it if you were honest. i know there are a couple of boring parts and like i said i had every intention of rewriting it, but i would love to hear an outside opinion. if you want ideas let me know.