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At 10:56pm on September 9, 2010, Ɖαωи ˩ɛσи said…
I've close my previous discussion of MInd Over Matter and added a little more in there, here is the new link. I'll update as soon as I can.

http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/mind-over-matter-1

At 1:41pm on August 31, 2010, missyloveannie said…
anyways, i like ur writing. u are actually good. i never expected to see myself crying with ur story but i did...u have added layers of emotions with this one. eclipse has always been difficult for me, that is- her realization toward jacob. but then in ur story she actually allowed herself to fall for him but in the end things fell apart. u don't know how difficult for me to read those lines...
so this is just the beginning of my journey with ur story, hope to leave more comments...
At 1:28pm on August 31, 2010, missyloveannie said…
hmmm.. i really can't connect with ur links for the story long forgiven.. good thing i was able to save ur word docu days before.
ok comment for the first few chapters...
bella. have u always seen her that way??? i thought i already understood her but the way u portrayed her in this story, the strength of her personality, amazing!! after all she gone through, with jacob, her baby. so yielding, she didn't even retaliate. no, she just let go. she really have grown and matured into a very strong and fine woman. u just made me respect her more.
edward. hmm... what to do with him??? i really hate it when his being self-righteous and wallowing in self-pity. every time he refuse to believe bella's ability to forgive and love him still despite of everything that happened between them, it's not because he doesn't deserve it but because he is undermining bella and the humanity in general. have he already seen too much of human trivialities that he forgot to look at the more important characteristics of humans???he always tries to box-in people. that's the reason why he is always caught surprised by human's goodness. angela's contentment. seth's pure kindness. and bella's forgiving and yielding personality. they're might be few but history is not void of people who showed marvelous sincerity, kindness and goodness. maybe edward has to learn to look farther. for someone whose smart and have live for more than a century. he can still be clueless...
At 9:40pm on August 26, 2010, missyloveannie said…
i can't seem to find ur story long forgiven. hmmm.. frustrating and totally exasperating...
can u send me the link, though??/ thanks!!!
At 2:39pm on October 10, 2009, Melissa said…
i found you
At 6:03pm on September 12, 2009, Celia said…

At 9:19pm on May 8, 2009, ally said…
hay lori thanks for the request so you have a cat me to his name is Emmet I got it when I first read twilight his name was edward but he always hiss when we called him that it was wierd it confused me he still hisses when I say that name
At 5:29pm on April 9, 2009, shoegirl said…
also wanted to say i love star wars too!
At 7:59pm on March 27, 2009, Ashlee[♥] said…
have ya read the first twelve chapters of midnight sun? the link is http://stepheniemeyer.com/pdf/midnightsun_partial_draft4.pdf
At 3:49pm on March 22, 2009, wolfandvampgirl14 said…
Hey Lori my name is Tanya I am new on this site and looking for friends. I think its cool that u like Star Wars and Harry Potter and of course Twilight.So do i. Hope ull exept me.
At 7:28pm on March 9, 2009, Cinderpelt said…
thnx very much finally i got a straight message to stephine!
At 5:49am on February 16, 2009, Yonniilita said…
"May The Force Be With You young Lori" hahahah just kidding with you! XD
so you like my video.. me too i like the first part when they swimming it fellt so real with the music and everything. whats yours?

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